Please read this poem that I made about my dad?

Question

Hi,

Please read my poem - I know that it's long. However, it would be greatly appreciated i you can tell me what you think of it. (Please not that I am almost eighteen years old)

It’s been so long since our family fell apart.
I’ll never forget the damage that you punctured into my heart.
All the grief, the misery, and the darkness that you put me through
and how you never cared what I wanted to do.
Now that you have a new family, suddenly now you decide to care.
Words are only words that I only hear, but the truth is that you’re never there.
You never saw the development of the woman that I became today.
You only remember the bad choices that I made.
But still, you want me back in your life
just to please your new daughter and your wife.
I’m sure that you never told them how you made my life burn like fire
and how you tried to persuade me of throwing away my true desires.
So, I can be daddy’s perfect picture.
My heart will always remain pure,
unlike yours who destroyed every hope that I had in you.
Good luck to you trying to pretend to your baby girl that you’re a perfect dad.
Honey, he’ll only tear your heart apart and at the end at of the day he will only see the bad.
He’ll leave you crying in the corner full of misery and then he’ll try to convince you that he will change.
Dad, it’s always the same.
The games you play, the lies that slip out of your mouth and how you smile with that evil grin.
You’re such a disappointment in my eyes, and I can count how many times you commuted sin.
I’m better off now with out you holding my hand, because you were never there after all.
You only watched every time someone punched me into the wall.
Saying that I should do better, and you only let me down.
I only hoped that one day that you would come around,
to tell me that you are proud.
We can’t rewrite history, and you can’t fixed the damage in my heart.
Because you made me feel worthless, and that I can never end what I started.
After everything that you put me through,
I’m glad that I never put my faith in you.

Answer 1

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That was REALLY good! I wonder if you gave it to him, not that it's important. It had to feel therapeutic, putting your feelings on paper. Stay strong sweetie, and you're quite the wordsmith!

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Asker's Comment:

THANKS EVERYONE!! I truly appreciate everyone's support and encouragement! You were truly so sweet, and you truly understood how I felt.

I wish you the best!!!!

Answer 2

awwwh. that was actually really good and intense.
hope your ohkay though=/

Answer 3

Heartbreaking and touching! AMAZING! You go girl!

Answer 4

its awesomee.

Answer 5

Deep! Kudos to you.

Answer 6

What a beautiful peom. And its really good to be able to be able to express what's going on in your head through writing. Writing assugnments always helped me through tough times.