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Temari
Lv 6
Temari asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

My Life Song... another for comment?

"My Life Song"

Feeling the rhythm of life I sway

Rhythmically to the tempo

Experiencing the rush…

I hold fast to the tune

The melody sweet

A pulse in time…

Warm embrace

My life

Song

Temari

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  • 1 decade ago
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    Life

    This tune

    I compose

    The notes I use

    Are emotional

    A symphony of love

    Orchestrated by feelings

    Conducted with intelligence

    And with the world as my audience

    Please listen to the music of my life

  • 1 decade ago

    I really love the creativity and the flow of this poem. It was wonderful and I enjoyed it.

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    This one is lovely. Flows smoothly and brings warmth. Well done.

  • 1 decade ago

    I got that beat! Tango move over! My compliments

  • 1 decade ago

    i really liked the way u structured this...short and sweet

  • sher
    Lv 5
    1 decade ago

    This one is beautiful!

  • 1 decade ago

    wow this is great

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    WOW! I hope that says it all!!!.

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