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Anonymous asked in Entertainment & MusicMusicRock and Pop · 1 decade ago

Can Anyone Tell Me If My Song I Wrote Is Any Good ?

Hi i'm Krysten Santiago And i am 12 yrs old...i wrote this song called a thousand goodbyes i hope you like it as much as my friend did...my family and friends say i have a gift of song writing and singing so enjoy.

A Thousand Goodbyes

How many times, it's hard to say.

That I've waking up next to a note on the bed

Got on a plane, I'll be back next week.

And left without so much, as a kiss on the cheek.

You're always gone and I'm never home.

You taught me everything I know about being alone.

What do I do when I need you, who do I call.

When I don't want to do it no more.

(ooh)

(Chorus)

I'm not trying to make you hurt

But you're getting exactly what you deserve.

So you can't tell me that

I don't

Have every reason in this world to leave you right now.

I can count a thousand times that you made me cry.

A thousand games you used to play.

And so I guess that's a thousand goodbyes,

A thousand goodbyes is all that I have to say.

Tell me what you're thinking

When I told you that me & you, we are finally over.

Make it a memory, that's ancient history.

I know I can't help but keep looking over my shoulder.

Love is like a mark that never goes away

And you got a part of my heart that I forever gave away.

What do I do when I need you, who do I call

Cause I don't want to do this no more.

(Ooh)

(Chorus)

I'm not trying to make you hurt

But you're getting exactly what you deserve.

So you can't tell me that

I don't

Have every reason in this world to leave you right now.

I can count a thousand times that you made me cry.

A thousand games you used to play.

And so I guess that's a thousand goodbyes,

A thousand goodbyes is all that I have to say.

There's nothing that's harder for me in this world

Then to not be your girl. (mm)

But I won't stand the cheating and lies,

You're no kind of man.

You won't give any respect for me

Cause you never were there,

You neglected me.

I'd rather spend my nights with somebody

Who treats me like I'm supposed to be.

(Treated all along)

(man,

I gave you everything.

I gave you my time,

I gave you my heart.

But you couldn't give me anything in return.

All them late nights, worrying about you.

A thousand times you didn't call,

A thousand tears you never cried.

All I have left for you is a thousand goodbyes)

(Chorus)

I'm not trying to make you hurt

But you're getting exactly what you deserve.

So you can't tell me that

I don't

Have every reason in this world to leave you right now.

I can count a thousand times that you made me cry.

A thousand games you used to play.

And so I guess that's a thousand goodbyes,

A thousand goodbyes is all that I have to say.

(It's all that I have, it's all that I have to say. for all of the lies, a thousand goodbyes)

Update:

it is basically r and b with a little pop

Update 2:

i wrote it about me and my cheating lieing ex joshua

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago
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    Wow..you're twelve years old?

    That is amazing..you sound so experienced in things that you have probably never done.

    I really like the chorus.

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    I like it. It's catchy and I don't even have the music. The only thing I think is missing is a unique thought or way of wording, but really the chorus is enough to carry it through... Good job!

  • 4 years ago

    The music that makes me cry the main is a music called "My Immortal" with the help of Evanescence. appealing , yet unhappy written lyrics. crucial music that brings me to tears from the 1st actual line of the music being sung. every time. Amy Lee can sing the hell out of that music.

  • 1 decade ago

    lyrics mean nothing. All you did was post a very long poem. Is it a ballad, country, rock, hip-hop, etc. Where is the music people can listen to?

    Without the music, this is not a good song at all.

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  • 1 decade ago

    You know what, thats actually really really good and it has a lot of meaning which is good in a song. Like crappy songs that are talking about sneakers and shoes and weird songs but it can relate to a lot of people.

  • 1 decade ago

    Wow that is great! I'm real picky too. I'd have kept it a secret if I were you so no one would copy it because it is so good. Keep it going and keep writing.

  • 1 decade ago

    not bad

    now depending on the feel (metal, acoustic) get some instruments in there

    Edit:

    woah didnt see that 12 yrs old

    that is amazing

  • 1 decade ago

    Wow, I think it's awesome! Great job! It's catchy and upbeat, but rockin!

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    those are words. its not a song unless it has MUSIC

    i'm saying it to myself and no offense but it sounds like crap

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    wow that is good for someone your age my fav part is the chorus

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