Anyone want to read some HP fan fiction?Not too long...?

Ok it's not big and amazing, just something i wrote one night when i was bored. But i just want to know what other people think, whether it's lame, dull, exciting. It's based on Severus Snape and his childhood. And i know fanfiction is never as good as the real thing, but i just want your thoughts.... show more Ok it's not big and amazing, just something i wrote one night when i was bored. But i just want to know what other people think, whether it's lame, dull, exciting. It's based on Severus Snape and his childhood.

And i know fanfiction is never as good as the real thing, but i just want your thoughts. Give me your critisism.

Oh yeah i know there are grammer errors too. But i just want to know what you think of the actual story.

Here is the link: http://halfbloodprince07.blogspot.com/

:-)
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