What do you think of this poem...cute in a wierd type of way?
I just wrote this out of boredom....its not really a love poem its more like a funny type thing...i thought it was cute and i want opinions lol so give me ur ideas
I may not.
I may not be the prettiest girl
But I’d promise to invite you into my world
I may not have the flyest clothes
And I may not listen to beyonce Knowles
But will you promise to kiss me on my nose?
I may not have the clearest skin
But i beg you to focus on what’s within.
I may not have the smallest hands
But I’d invite you to with me to other lands
If you buy me flowers, I may let them die
But I promise our love I wouldn’t deny
I may not have the smallest feet
But when you’re away I’d always keep the house neat
I may want a baby a little too much
But when it gets here I’d promise not to fuss
At times I may shop a little too much
But I promise, i know what is important and such
I may not lie still at night as I sleep
And my body may shake at times when I weep
But we’ll savor the joy that I’ll forever keep
I may be cleaning all the time
And if it gets on your nerves just give me a sign
I may be a little stinky when at home all day
But I promise to wash if you’d love me anyway
I may behave like I have a heart of steel
And it may bother you that I’m obsessed with seal
But I promise, his music is good
And I’d introduce you to him if I could
And I may not care too much about certain things
But I’m always concerned about what life will bring
And the world could possibly end today
But I’d be really hurt if you didn’t hear me say
All the things unsaid that I’ve been hiding away
And I may not have a favorite colour
And I hate cream cheese but I love me some butter
and I make promises that I plan to break
and I may smoke weed for my sanity’s sake
And it may be weird that I have so many tattoos
And they may say that when in love, people are just fools.
But I promise you that we’d be cool.
And If u promise not to buy me any unnecessary jewels
I promise you, that we’d be cool.
- 1 decade agoFavorite Answer
it seems to drag on, but it's really good, yeah. It sort of changes personality at the very end. The begining sounds like you want to go way together to a happy place, and the end sounds like you want him to excuse your flaws, but its real good either way
- Anonymous1 decade ago
poem is ok, yes cute, but sounds a bit needy