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World War 1 had its shares of advantages and disadvantages. However, for Canada it was not a disaster. In fact, Canada benefitted a great deal from World War 1. Although, many lives were lost throughout the war, Canada achieved an independent status in the League of Nations. Their economy started growing significantly and more than 1000 new factories were created. Canada finally started shifting views from an agricultural civilization to a strongly industrialized nation. In the mid 20’s the Royal Canadian Air Force was created. New inventions were being made and new ideas were born. Furthermore, the incomes of farmers, miners and other employers had grown substantially before World War 1. Canada was so proud of its accomplishments that it even helped conquered countries in Europe obtain freedom and rights. New rights, more income, better living conditions; Canada was being looked upon as a country to gleefully live in.

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    World War *One* had its shares of advantages and disadvantages. However, for Canada*,* it was not a disaster. In fact, Canada *benefited* a great deal from World War *One*. Although, *remove this comma* many lives were lost throughout the war, Canada achieved an independent status in the League of Nations. Their economy started growing significantly and more than *one thousand* new factories were created. Canada finally started shifting views from an agricultural civilization to a strongly industrialized nation. In the mid 20’s*,* the Royal Canadian Air Force was created. New inventions were being made and new ideas were born. Furthermore, the incomes of farmers, miners*,* and other *blue-collar workers* had grown substantially before World War *One*. Canada was so proud of its accomplishments that it even helped conquered countries in Europe obtain freedom and rights. *With n*ew rights, *increased* income, *and* better living conditions*,* Canada was being looked upon as a *gleeful country to* live in.

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