Anonymous
Anonymous asked in Entertainment & MusicMusicRap and Hip-Hop · 1 decade ago

How you like my freestyle?

inspired by another question. made this up right now.

Smoked out, mossin immorally

i rep the A in YA, free

orally to speak candidly

about the chronic leaves

that bleed when i breathe

see when i leave, the smoke follow me

robbery of sanity, how can it be

coached and always warned

bout the 'proachin thunder storm

never listened, now forever distant

from the honey combs

moan on the phone

when informed by homez

that lil' ity bitty

got my money on her dome

now i'm scratchin, for fractions

of sense from these events

cents turn into pence

when i grips ol' english

sticky fingers, my brain remain uninjured

it's stealth like ninjas

felt like syringas

deep within your veins

verbal cocaine is what i'm spittin

at you lames

all the same, respect the masterful

girls get the mattress full

that's no bull, when you check beneath the wool

lol, don't take it too seriously

Update:

@Ant. : yeah i'm toasted too

Update 2:

@Jet: Yeah i know what you mean, I have a good flow for it too. I'm gonna cop a mic soon and spit some **** over some instrumentals.

Update 3:

if it helps, i wrote it to this beat

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pLFuWUxN1xo

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago
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    Hard to say, it reads well, but it's hard to judge without hearing the delivery, yknow?

    Sounds sick in my head over fugees, post it up if you record over it for sure.

    I was at

    "

    sticky fingers, my brain remain uninjured

    it's stealth like ninjas

    felt like syringas

    deep within your veins

    verbal cocaine is what i'm spittin

    at you lames"

    when the beat dropped out n came back, sounded ill.

  • 1 decade ago

    I tried to spit it over that Fugees beat and it came out pretty nice. of coarse it sounded off at some parts, but I didn't write it so I'm not sure what parts are sped up, where to take a breath, etc. it was a nice read though. post the audio when its done

  • 1 decade ago

    that postes.

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    No.

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  • 1 decade ago

    sick...

    Source(s): im high as hell
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