Do you love the forest at night when the moon is full? comments, suggestions?

Swirling pearlescence shrouds the moon gleaming fair

sweet silence enfolds and entwines in it's hair

above and beneath the land gleams lightly luminous

sighing shadows spread cloaks softly voluminous

in gloaming light wind whispers breathless wisp

the forest speaks sibilant, leafy lisp

Kelly C

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  • 10 years ago
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    A creative economy of words, evoking a plethora of pleasant images.

    I love how the last line skillfully mimics that "sibilant, leafy lisp."

    Very nicely done!

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  • 3 years ago

    i imagine of Lono Moku. in accordance to Hawaiian custom, she became an truly elderly sage woman who had worked for ever and ever to grant nutrition, take care of, and an practise for her 22 little ones, limitless grandchildren, and abusive husband. at lengthy very last on the verge of complete exhaustian, Lono Moku chanced on the skill to flee her existence of drudgery by technique of hiking a mystical rainbow to achieve an huge hammock contained in the full moon. To on the present time, human beings throughout Hawaii nevertheless seem to the sky to be certain Lono Moku asleep in her hammock even as the moon is complete.

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  • Josh P
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    10 years ago

    I love being out at night when there is a light drizzle.

    The sky is artificially illuminated from the near light of the city

    You can feel a cool breeze brush over the landscape

    and you look up into the sky and feel so infinitesimal

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  • 10 years ago

    Unfortunately I live in the city with no forest in sight, but in answer to your question - yes.

    How I yearn to be in the forest at night, when it is cool and slightly damp, to breathe in that fresh clean air. How I wish to be there.

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  • 10 years ago

    Very well done, I enjoyed the visual, and physical descriptions.Keep those visual expressions coming.Keep writing, you have a God gifted talent.

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  • 10 years ago

    I didn't count the beat because it felt good just reading it. Nicely put. A keeper.

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  • Anonymous
    10 years ago

    Very beautiful. Great job.

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  • 10 years ago

    You have a great talent at rhyme.

    I'm tired of thinking....I'm going prose and short stories.....

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  • 10 years ago

    I would freak out, dance mad with joy!

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  • 10 years ago

    that is awesome

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