Do you love the forest at night when the moon is full? comments, suggestions?
Swirling pearlescence shrouds the moon gleaming fair
sweet silence enfolds and entwines in it's hair
above and beneath the land gleams lightly luminous
sighing shadows spread cloaks softly voluminous
in gloaming light wind whispers breathless wisp
the forest speaks sibilant, leafy lisp
- BlueFeatherLv 610 years agoFavorite Answer
A creative economy of words, evoking a plethora of pleasant images.
I love how the last line skillfully mimics that "sibilant, leafy lisp."
Very nicely done!
- hannulaLv 43 years ago
i imagine of Lono Moku. in accordance to Hawaiian custom, she became an truly elderly sage woman who had worked for ever and ever to grant nutrition, take care of, and an practise for her 22 little ones, limitless grandchildren, and abusive husband. at lengthy very last on the verge of complete exhaustian, Lono Moku chanced on the skill to flee her existence of drudgery by technique of hiking a mystical rainbow to achieve an huge hammock contained in the full moon. To on the present time, human beings throughout Hawaii nevertheless seem to the sky to be certain Lono Moku asleep in her hammock even as the moon is complete.
- Josh PLv 410 years ago
I love being out at night when there is a light drizzle.
The sky is artificially illuminated from the near light of the city
You can feel a cool breeze brush over the landscape
and you look up into the sky and feel so infinitesimal
- Forever LookingLv 510 years ago
Unfortunately I live in the city with no forest in sight, but in answer to your question - yes.
How I yearn to be in the forest at night, when it is cool and slightly damp, to breathe in that fresh clean air. How I wish to be there.
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- 10 years ago
Very well done, I enjoyed the visual, and physical descriptions.Keep those visual expressions coming.Keep writing, you have a God gifted talent.
- Yesu BenLv 710 years ago
I didn't count the beat because it felt good just reading it. Nicely put. A keeper.
- Anonymous10 years ago
Very beautiful. Great job.
- JrahdelLv 510 years ago
You have a great talent at rhyme.
I'm tired of thinking....I'm going prose and short stories.....
- Thimmappa M.S.Lv 710 years ago
I would freak out, dance mad with joy!
- 10 years ago
that is awesome