emy10120 asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 10 years ago

What do you think of my poem?

If you want me to beg you, I just might. I don't have the strength to put up a fight. I need you, if I don't have you I fear my heart might fail. I'm ready to turn this corner, please don't bail. I want to unfold my sails but you need to be the mast, let's go to sea and explore this world that's so vast.

I think I might add some more lines, but I'm not sure yet. Let me know what you think about it!

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  • Anonymous
    10 years ago
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    it scans like a song and that's a good thing then i like a refrain running all around my brain

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