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Anonymous asked in Education & ReferenceWords & Wordplay · 10 years ago

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While some may argue that athletes are tested mentally and physically, when they play their respective sports, they are nothing more than entertainers.

The social learning theory, perhaps the most influential theory of learning and development, proposed by Albert Bandura, argued that people learn new information and behaviours by watching other people.

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  • 10 years ago
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    While some may argue that athletes are tested mentally and physically when they play their respective sports, they are nothing more than entertainers.

    (delete comma after physically)

    Second part looks okay.

    Source(s): I teach 12th grade english
  • 10 years ago

    Some may argue that athletes are mentally and physically tested but honestly, they are nothing more than entertainers when they play their respective sports.

    Social learning theory, the most influential theory of learning and development proposed by Albert Bandura, argued that people learn new information and behaviors by watching other people.

  • Anonymous
    10 years ago

    While some may argue that athletes are tested mentally and physically, they are nothing more than entertainers when they play their respective sports.

    The social learning theory; perhaps the most influential theory of learning and development, proposed by Albert Bandura, argued that people learn additional information and behaviors by watching other people.

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  • 10 years ago

    While some may argue that athletes are tested mentally, and physically, when they play their respective sports they are nothing more than entertainers.

    The social learning theory, perhaps the most influential theory of learning and development, proposed by Albert Bandura, argued that people learn new information and behaviors by watching other people.

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