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No Hope then no fear

Where there is no hope, there is no fear. This is a quote that describes powerful and strong thoughts or words about life.

We fear from life all the time because our hopes rely on those fears. Our hopes lets us achieve goals and shows us creative dreams, that leads to success. There has to be a lot of fear, where there is hope because hopes only successed after facing a lot of troubles. Suppose you have an upcoming exam on Monday. You would have studied all weekend for good revision. You had to face a lot of problems and there would be fear in your mind. But at the end your results will be great because you tried hard and put your mind to it. For example a solider is very brave, courageous and confident, but they still fear. Because if he/she dies during the war, he/she will leave behind their family, friends and the whole country suffering from pain. But of he/she wins he/she will have good reputation and the country would get there freedom. Everyone fears from life in different ways because that's what life is all about.

Remember you have hopes and fears, but when you fight them you will successed after all.

Please help Its due Friday and I have present it to the class.

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  • Anonymous
    9 years ago
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    "Where there is no hope, there is no fear." This is a quote that describes powerful and strong thoughts about life.

    We fear from life all the time because our hopes rely on those fears. Our hopes let us achieve goals and show us creative dreams that lead to success. There has to be a lot of fear, where there is hope because hopes only succeeds after facing a lot of troubles. Suppose you have an upcoming exam on Monday. You would have studied all weekend for good revision. You had to face a lot of problems and there would be fear in your mind. But at the end your results will be great because you tried hard and put your mind to it. Another example would be a solider that is very brave, courageous and confident, but they still fear. Because if he/she dies during the war, he/she will leave behind their family, friends and the whole country suffering from pain. But of he/she wins he/she will have a good reputation and the country would get there freedom. Everyone fears from life in different ways because that's what life is all about.

    Remember you have hopes and fears, but when you fight them you will succeed after all.

    Source(s): That was a GREAT paragraph! It had a few grammatical mistakes but other than that it was fantastic. You described the quote well and gave exceptional examples and then further explained those. AWESOME! :) You will be great! Good luck! :)
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