PLEASE HELP :):):):):)?

Hey so I know this is in the wrong section but I really need some help improving my resume. I have plenty of volunteer and work experience as specified below. Could you help me improve my resume please :) I desperately need a job! :)

Thanks again! :)


2011 Currently enrolled in Grade 12, Academic level of study

2008 Fine Arts Award

2008- Present Work Ethic Award

2008-Present Academic Honor Roll


2010 - 2011 Tim Hortons

Customer Service Representive

- Provide the highest level of customer service

- Solve problems and find solutions

- Prepare and serve food with careful attention to health and safety guidelines

2009-Present XXXXX Catering Services


- Transport food to and from the tables

- Serve food with careful attention to the food guildlines


2009 – Present XXXX Buddies Network

Tutor/ Coordinator

- Teach reading, writing and comprehension skills to primary students

- Organize the program

- Assist in developing primary students fundamental skills for reading

2010 XXXXXX Swim Teame

- Helped primary students develop fundamental swimming skills

2009 Variety the Children’s Charity

- Participate in various telethon and community events aimed to raise funds for kids living with disabilities.


- Proficient with Microsoft Word, Excel, and PowerPoint

- Hardworking individual who completes tasks on time and with attention to detail

- Enjoy learning

- Energetic and outgoing personality

- Relates well with others

- Work well under pressure


- Swimming

- Meeting and interacting with new people

- Music

Any improvements you could make would be of great help :)

P.S Ignore all of the spelling mistakes for now :)

2 Answers

  • Anonymous
    9 years ago
    Favorite Answer

    Get rid of interests - the children's charity adds nothing significant

  • 9 years ago

    Keep everything professional, don't talk about your personality, take out the "enjoys learning" that makes you seem like you're trying too hard, take out the "highest level" part on your first section, just keep "customer service."

    Remember, your interview is where your personality shines through, not your resume ;)

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