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Anonymous asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 7 years ago

Is this poetry help pleaaase :)?

We are doing an assignment in class, and its is to be a 6-8 word line of poetry. Its supposed to describe the painting. And I am soooo hopeless when it comes to poetry.

Here:

Village bagpipes kissing with swirling red, or maybe, Village bagpipes kissing swirling gowns of red.

Because the man is playing the bagpipes, and a few people are kissing. The red because people in red dresses are dancing and stuff. Thanks for any input.

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  • 7 years ago
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    You need to re-think this, as the way you have

    presented it, reads as though the bagpipes are

    kissing, not the people...lol

    Here is an alternative:-

    Dancing and kissing in swirling red

    Bagpipes playing as joy is spread...

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