Is this poetry help pleaaase :)?
We are doing an assignment in class, and its is to be a 6-8 word line of poetry. Its supposed to describe the painting. And I am soooo hopeless when it comes to poetry.
Village bagpipes kissing with swirling red, or maybe, Village bagpipes kissing swirling gowns of red.
Because the man is playing the bagpipes, and a few people are kissing. The red because people in red dresses are dancing and stuff. Thanks for any input.
- PANDORA ΠανδώραLv 77 years agoFavorite Answer
You need to re-think this, as the way you have
presented it, reads as though the bagpipes are
kissing, not the people...lol
Here is an alternative:-
Dancing and kissing in swirling red
Bagpipes playing as joy is spread...