What do you think of my poem? C/C?

No regrets...

A phrase tossed around

with no understanding of

consequence

The consequence of not

allowing regret to change

your mind of what

regrets help you avoid.

We all regret the mistakes of

our past but the past

is the past and we live with

our mistakes.

if a person who repeats

his actions and expects

a different result

falls into the group of

insanity,

then to everyone that says

"I Live With No Regrets"

speaks with disillusion

because this phrase is a regret

that no one should say

proudly.

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  • Andy
    Lv 5
    7 years ago
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    It's OK. The main thing holding it back is your choice of line breaks and shape. The line breaks seem random and are without effect. Fix this and the poem will be a lot better. That said it's not bad. I like this theme of regret or rather the benefits of regret. I hope this helps. Good luck.

  • 7 years ago

    As a poem it does fall short, but as a prose statement, a single sentence about a belief or logical process, it is perfect.

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