The Days After Valentine's Day... What do you thinkof my poem?C/C...?
This day brings more joy than yesterday
as my heart still resonnates with love
for the girl i held on numerous occasion
at times of patience and weary
before and after the 14th day of February
Why must this day be the day
that i show you affection
my love is 364 more days entwined
with every fiber in your soul and mind
trying to unravel and define your all around
mental, physical, and spiritual you
a feat that cannot be accomplished in a day
so i pray for another year and more
and yet like a fool in love
i will still give you
candy kisses and heart-shaped messages saying
your mine and i'm yours
even say "I Love You"
on the day of, past, and before
- JenniferLv 67 years agoFavorite Answer
Interesting piece and I liked it. I loved the way you have covered thoughts in this poem. I can feel what you actually intended to share with us, so you are successful in making it effective.
Keep it up :)