French Help?

can someone check my grammar? not sure if i did this right..(Moineau is a name and im relating it to a picture...not the point tho i just need grammar check)

Moineau veut être musicien comme cet homme. Il semble un homme a l'age de 20 ans comme Moineau. Il joue d'instrument comme Moineau aussi, mais Moineau joue d'harmonica.

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  • Tangi
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    4 years ago
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    Moineau veut être musicien comme cet homme. Il a l'air d'avoir 20 ans comme Moineau. Il joue d'un instrument comme Moineau, mais Moineau joue de l'harmonica.

    You can replace the last Moineau by "celui-ci". It literally means "this one" and it would sound weird in English. But in French, it's a common way to talk about what you talked about last without having to repeat it.

    • cheese4 years agoReport

      thanks so much for all this help :) really appreciate it.

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