"Happy birthday to a very special person who has always brightened up my day every time I see you." Does this make sense?

Update:

or should I replace "you" with "her"?

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  • 1 year ago
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    Grammatically speaking you shouldn't switch the subject from "person" to "you" in the same sentence. Also you should keep it present tense because it still happens (remove the "has" and "ed"). This could be reworded as

    "Happy birthday to a very special person who brightens up my day every time I see them!"

    or you could make it two sentences and say

    "Happy birthday to a very special person! You are always able to brighten up my day, so I hope I can return the favor on your special day!!"

    Either way this is a really nice message to send someone!!

  • 1 year ago

    not saying it to me

  • 1 year ago

    Hello,

    I think it makes sense grammatically, possibly, but maybe it requires a comma, etc...

    However, a re-wording would be better. I think this would be more formal...

    "Happy Birthday!

    To a very special person, who has always brightened up my day every time that I have seen them.

    Love from,

    Adey"

    Just don't forget to change the name to your own!

    I hope that helps!

    ;)

  • 1 year ago

    Makes sense to me. What's the problem?

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