I am Hollow ?

Hollowed heart

Paltry soul

Lost mind

Confused life wanderer

Searching for meaning

Searching for someone, or even just a thing

A memory to hold dear

When the cold night wind breathes close

And emptiness confides

Where has the warm gone to ?

Where has the people gone to ?

Whilst i look into the space, still

2 Answers

  • 8 months ago

    There are parts I liked.

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  • Anonymous
    8 months ago

    Oh no. Yet another kiddo poem with incomplete sentences, present participles not connected to the rest of the words, blah blah please read some real poetry and prose please kid please.

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    • Dewa Gagah6 months agoReport

      Getting triggered over some poetry, your life and mind is a caged bird and Shakespeare can lick me ballz. Lmao

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