Anonymous
Anonymous asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 8 months ago

Can you make any suggestions on this poetry? My friend feel like the last paragraph is a bit confusing.?

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  • Anonymous
    8 months ago

    Yes, I can make several suggestions, but all of them would probably violate Yahoo's terms of service in one or more ways. I can, however, reveal that the phrases "shove them" and "sun don't shine" occur repeatedly.

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  • Tina
    Lv 7
    8 months ago

    The first four lines could be a poem. The next three are just some muddled sentences.

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  • Anonymous
    8 months ago

    Yeah, I just copywrited this work

    • Tina
      Lv 7
      8 months agoReport

      Do you know what copywrite means?

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