Poetry: How to say this phrase better? Da reason I'm still here - I don't know why?

I'm work on writing a rap song and want that bar to end with " dont know why." It's refers to that I don't know why I'm still exist in the world because things are really hard for me. 

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  • mars
    Lv 7
    1 month ago

    There's a reason that I am/ still here/ but, I don't know why? (Sometimes it just/ makes me want to cry).

    • mars
      Lv 7
      1 month agoReport

      Hang in there Brian- 'Adversity builds character' Keep on Writin'!

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  • 1 month ago

    The rhythm of the sentence would flow a lot smoother if you change Da to The. Also, it flows better when I read it as "The reason I'm here/Still don't know why"

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