Poetry: How to say this phrase better? Da reason I'm still here - I don't know why?
I'm work on writing a rap song and want that bar to end with " dont know why." It's refers to that I don't know why I'm still exist in the world because things are really hard for me.
- marsLv 71 month ago
There's a reason that I am/ still here/ but, I don't know why? (Sometimes it just/ makes me want to cry).
- 1 month ago
The rhythm of the sentence would flow a lot smoother if you change Da to The. Also, it flows better when I read it as "The reason I'm here/Still don't know why"