Anonymous asked in Arts & HumanitiesBooks & Authors · 1 month ago

What do you think of these verses?

The cement town was never this beautiful:

you beautified it with the melancholy of 

your blue eyes

1 Answer

  • 1 month ago

    Well I would use,

    “This town had never amounted to such “hard as cement when I gazed upon its lifeless beauty” beauty as yours. Your Blue eyes and wonderful posture. But most importantly your kind heart.” “But I will see still your melancholy eyes in my soul.” And your piercing beauty in my dreams. 

    Sorry I feel poetic today. Wonderful verse by the way

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