What do you think of these verses?
The cement town was never this beautiful:
you beautified it with the melancholy of
your blue eyes
- 1 month ago
Well I would use,
“This town had never amounted to such “hard as cement when I gazed upon its lifeless beauty” beauty as yours. Your Blue eyes and wonderful posture. But most importantly your kind heart.” “But I will see still your melancholy eyes in my soul.” And your piercing beauty in my dreams.
Sorry I feel poetic today. Wonderful verse by the way