Seeking constructive feedback on protest song?
About two weeks ago, I posted a protest song here called “Stand Up, Fight Back.” Based on the feedback I got, I thought it was best to start again from scratch. I am seeking any constructive criticism or feedback. Unfortunately, I don’t have a melody yet or any music to go with it. I want to know if you have any other suggestions, want to elaborate on something, or have anything else to add. Thank you.
See the tumblr link below:
- Anonymous4 weeks ago
How does it feel to be a useful idiot?
- 4 weeks ago
Your link doesn't lead to a song at all. It leads to what looks like a poem or lyrics.
To be honest (and you asked) as a piece of writing I don't think much of it.
But... I could say that about lyrics to many songs. It might be they would be okay used in a song.