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With different cases of Hispanic people in the documentary, each one of them was a dire situation. It criticized heavily about the fact that when an undocumented person, has a family, is arrested, a person should go to detention center while his/her family or child to be held at another detention center.
- Ms. WorthLv 71 month ago
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Each case in the documentary showed Hispanic people in dire situations.
The documentary strongly criticized the fact that when undocumented people with families are arrested and held at one detention center, their children are held at a different one.