Survey: How do you feel when you read this excerpt?
Days and nights passed and William Hazelton would come and go without any further discussion about his school. He would most of the time listen to me as I read my story. He even gave me his word that he would help me publish my book whenever I completed it.
The other times, he would teach me a few facts about the history of the Saxons and the Celts or he would narrate the stories of the Crusades, like a grandfather who would tell his grandson entertaining tales with patient and affection. I learnt so much from him…
- UserLv 72 months ago
Unsettled by the poor choice of word order in the second sentence.