San
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San asked in Society & CultureLanguages · 2 months ago

Is this sentence grammatically correct?

While they sang "Happy Birthday," the dog chose the moment to pee all over the floor.

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  • Anonymous
    2 months ago
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    The sentence is fine, but I would insert EXACT into the sentence, thus:

    While they sang "Happy Birthday", the dog chose the exact moment to pee all over the floor.

    The comma should be placed after the quotations in "Happy Birthday", not "Happy Birthday," as was written. 

  • Anonymous
    2 months ago

    Not quite:  "the dog chose *that* moment..."

  • Anonymous
    2 months ago

    I would probably go with 'that moment' but it is fine.

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