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There were only a few times I went to outside with my dad and that was the most memorable experience I had with him. That was the last time we spent each other in Korea. A few months later, we immigrated to the United States.

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  • Fin
    Lv 4
    2 months ago
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    The most memorable experiences I had with my dad were when we went outside together. That was the last time we spent with each other in Korea. A few months later, we immigrated to the United States.

    ---Small syntax correction, just made that 1st sentence flow a little better.  I added the 'with' preposition to your 2nd sentence.

  • John P
    Lv 7
    2 months ago

    "...last time we spent time with each other..." But many people would say "...we spent time together".

    Note that Americans say "immigrated to", but here in Britain we generally say "emigrated to".

  • 2 months ago

    Why should we do your work for you, and this is not even a question 

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