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Two weeks ago today, Ariel came into the world!

Ariel, thanks million already for your presence and can't describe enough how much this mean to me and my sister's family. Your uncle will have your back and always love you!!!

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  • RP
    Lv 7
    1 month ago

    See prior answer that corrects this.

  • John P
    Lv 7
    1 month ago

    'thanks a million....'  Note 'a million'.

    I have no idea what you mean by 'have your back'.  In British English that expression has no meaning.

    Your style changes after the first sentence, which is addressed to your family and friends.  The remainder is addressed directly to Ariel.  On first reading, that change is a little confusing.

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