Grammar or sentence check please?

Two weeks ago today, Ariel came into the world!

Ariel, thanks million already for your presence and can't describe enough how much this mean to me and my sister's family. Your uncle will have your back and always love you!!!

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  • RP
    Lv 7
    1 month ago
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    Put a period after "presence", replace the following "and" with "I" and it will be fine.

  • 1 month ago

    It is understandable but needs some small changes:

    Two weeks ago today, Ariel came into the world!

    Ariel, thanks a million already for your presence; I can't describe enough how much this means to me and my sister's family. Your uncle will have your back and will always love you!

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