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Q: In some countries, all new drivers are required to attend driving school. In other countries, driving school is optional. Which policy do you think is better and why?

A:I think, driving schools should be mandatory. Since no matter what it takes, every drivers has responsibilities to drive safely.  In Japanese driving school, we can learn basic rules from text book and exams to confirm those knowledges. However, what's crucial is test driving with a instructor. Side by side, they show us what to pay attention to. Those are for example, road signs or pedestrians. Without these training, the number of traffic accidents would increase. 

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  • drip
    Lv 7
    4 weeks ago

    Do not start out with “I think”.  

    They are asking you what you think, there is no reason why you need to start out by saying I think.

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