I wrote a poem for my Creative Writing class and I used the simile, "Like a deer in the headlights." My teacher said I shouldn't use that because it's too much of a cliche. Any ideas of a replacement that still conveys the shock and horror? It has to be a simile.
- Alema PequoiaLv 74 weeks ago
Like a fawn alerted by the howl of wolves...
- 2 months ago
Like life at death.
- GA41Lv 73 months ago
Like a speeder clocked by a radar. Like a husband being caught with his mistress. Like the crack of lightning on a still night. Like an unexpected wedding proposal. Like discovering your girlfriend is a first cousin. Like suddenly discovering you are adopted.
- Anonymous3 months ago
LIke Herod when he found out the price of Salome's dance.Source(s): Not in the fridge, Salome, dear.
- How do you think about the answers? You can sign in to vote the answer.
- PetterLv 73 months ago
"Like Trump when realising he actually lost to Biden."