Is this sentence grammatically correct?

This evening is raining and thundering a lot and because of this I cannot turn on the computer because of I am fear of the pc can to burn because of thunder.

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  • Fin
    Lv 4
    2 months ago
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    I think it reads smoother if it is simplified and broken up into two sentences:

    With all the rain and thunder this evening, I'm afraid to turn on the computer. I don't want it to short circuit if there is an electrical surge.

  • 2 months ago

    No. I would phrase it as follows," It is raining and thundering a lot this evening, so I can't turn on my computer because I am fearful that my pc will get ruined by an electrical power surge, that could come from a lightning strike from the storm."

  • Anonymous
    2 months ago

    No, not even a little bit

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