Is this sentence correct?

Question

 In the literature review, the methodology and every aspect of the research problem were described, which included digital marketing and the process of organizational performance in telecommunications firms in Jordan.

Answer 1

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It is correct, but if you try reading this out loud, you are going to run out of breath as there is only one stop. Try this:

In the literature review, the methodology and every aspect of the research problem were described. The description included digital marketing, and the process of organizational performance in telecommunications firms in Jordan.

Answer 2

Yes, it seems fine as written.

Answer 3

It's grammatically correct. However, it is not well-written. A teacher should have taught you that overly long sentences don't make you sound smart. They just baffle readers. It starts out introducing a "literature" review, but the concepts that follow are business-oriented and not related to literature.