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 In the literature review, the methodology and every aspect of the research problem were described, which included digital marketing and the process of organizational performance in telecommunications firms in Jordan.

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  • 2 months ago
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    It is correct, but if you try reading this out loud, you are going to run out of breath as there is only one stop. Try this:

    In the literature review, the methodology and every aspect of the research problem were described. The description included digital marketing, and the process of organizational performance in telecommunications firms in Jordan.

  • ?
    Lv 7
    2 months ago

    Yes, it seems fine as written.

  • joedlh
    Lv 7
    2 months ago

    It's grammatically correct. However, it is not well-written. A teacher should have taught you that overly long sentences don't make you sound smart. They just baffle readers. It starts out introducing a "literature" review, but the concepts that follow are business-oriented and not related to literature.

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