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When it comes to your finances, you can't let your reputation come before your bank account. If you're afraid of being called cheap, you need to get over it. The people who toss those terms around are the same people who are deep in debt, so what do they know about money matters? Being thriftier will help you increase your cash flow and decrease your stress level, so draw up a tighter budget and ignore what people say about your spending habits.

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  • 2 months ago
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    It's good. Just replace the comma after stress level with a semi-colon.

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