Native English speakers, could you please help me with these issues?

Is this paragraph correct:

"Considering that this conversation happened through the phone of the White House, and that he probably didn't even have close relations with the President of Ukraine, it surprises me that he thought this wouldn't COME PUBLIC, be it from the American side or the Ukrainian side."

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  • Anonymous
    2 months ago
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    Yes, but instead of saying come say "become" It surprises me that he thought this wouldn’t become public. I would perhaps add knowledge after public, but it looks fine to me.

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